Monday, 31 March 2014
The bite
When I saw her trying to park in the same place I wanted to, she got into my nerves and made me so mad. When I get mad the only thing I can do is trying to concentrate to not to bite. When I get mad I need to bite.
That woman distract me so I had to drag her finger off.
I could not imagine how strong my jaws are. I blocked myself so I ran away with her finger in my mouth.
One week later I went for a walk and I saw my picture hung on every lamppost advising:
"Wanted, biter girl".
Una mujer pierde un dedo por robarle el aparcamiento a otra
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very funny. The ending is neat, but there's an important spelling mistake.
ReplyDeleteI think it has a great imagery, I definitley have the picture of the woman with the finger in her mouth!
ReplyDeleteGod I love the story... It made me laugh! Really good new, better interpretation!
ReplyDeleteIs a little creepy, but there are some humor at the beginning and get your atention until the end.
ReplyDeleteIt is a type of story, that is creepy but at the same time it has humor. Is a very good story, I've laughed with it
ReplyDeleteIt is a really good one. It makes me laugh and keep my attention until the end! Great job!!
ReplyDeleteI really like it. It has a very strong imagery, and it made me laugh, very funny!!
ReplyDeleteWhen i read it y coul not stop laughing.
ReplyDeletei really like the story and the way you changes it.
really nice.